Thursday, April 18, 2013

Gary Snyder -- "I Went into the Maverick Bar"

This poem was very interesting , i actually like the straight forward approach she used. She went into describing her surroundings when she entered the bar with a friend. I know it was a friend because she said "the bartender asked us" which led me to know she wasn't alone. I took this poem and related it in a woman's perspective because she said how she had her hair in a cap and left her earring in the car. She seem to me like she had a long day at work and this was a escape for her. She reminisce on her surroundings of what they reminded her of. I actually enjoyed this poem because i like when i get to use my imagination because it could be many things this poem specifically is trying to get across. How do you feel about this poem ? Do you think she should of put more into it? , More into "the tough old stars"

Thursday, April 11, 2013

Sun Flower Sutra

The poem was very different for me, his rhythm and the words he spoke were loving but a sadness to it. He started to try to explain how the sunflower is beautiful and he is very detailed in his words about the sunflower. His style is very unique, he abbreviated and used different way of expressing what he was really talking about. I don't feel he was genuinely  talking about a "Sunflower". I feel he was talking about a long lost love he had for someone that turned on there self, by going down the wrong path. I Love how he  integrated certain things into his real thought by using descriptive words, for instance "You were never no locomotive, Sunflower, you were a sunflower! ". His style is so different that i need to know more, more about him and the background to this poem and his life. Who is the locomotive? who is the sunflower? Why is the sunflower not a sunflower ?